A thud resounded through Evan's room as his door shuddered and a deadpan, "Ow." could be heard from the other side.
The tall goth got up from his bed to open his door, revealing the youngest goth on the floor across from his doorway.
"Georgie...did you just KICK my door?" Evan said slowly, his tone angry and disbelieving.
"...N-no." Georgie quickly scrammbled up from the floor, "But I have something to show you."
"Okay..." The curly haired teen let the boy in despite the fact that he so did kick his door, because there was a shoe-shaped dent in the white painted wood. Not that Evan really cared what happened to his conformist parent's house.
"So what do you want to show me?" Evan asked once the door was shut again.
Georgie looked like he was supressing a smile as he fiddled with his black studded belt, "I have a surprise. I got a tattoo."
The tall goth blinked and raised and eyebrow at the excited goth.
"Guess where I got it." Georgie didn't give him time to answer, "On my butt, that's where!"
"Wiat...what?!" Evan sat down on his bed and gave the young goth a disbelieving look, "What the hell were you thinking?!"
"But I got it for you..." The young goth pouted, his hands freezing on his belt buckle.
The tall goth gave a small smile and shook his head, "Why on earth would you get a tattoo, on your ASS of all places, for me?"
Georgie's shoulders drooped in disappointment, "You...you said I was too young for you. I wanted to show you that I'm more grown up than you think."
A few seconds passed as his words processed in the curly goth's mind, then he smiled and pulled Georgie into a hug, "You're so cute."
The black haired boy was about to protest that he was sexy, not cute, but he felt too comfortable with Evan's scent all around him.
"You didn't have to go and do something crazy like that." Evan put his arms on his shoulders, putting him at arms length, "I was just worried that with you being a freshmen and me being a senior that you wouldn't want to date someone who was going to leave you next year."
"I don't mind, we can still meet up after school and on weekends, right?" Georgie pressed, trying to get him to say yes.
"Okay, if you're willing to make it work then I'm fine with it." Evan's hand brushed his bangs aside as he chastely kissed the boy.
Georgie melted into the kiss and his hand reached for the larger one that held his face.
As Evan backed away he licked his lips which were now smeared with Georgie's dark purple lipstick.
"Alright, fine. Let's see this tattoo..." The older boy sighed and gestured for the young goth to drop his pants.
Georgie turned around and undid his jeans, letting them sag slightly to show his rear.
After a moment of the tall goth fighting down giggles, he pointed and simply said, "GIR."
"It says Grrr?" Georgie asked over his shoulder, confused beyond all belief. He had been drunk with Dylan and Stan when he'd got it, so the idea shouldn't have really surprised him.
"No. It's GIR, from Invader Zim." Evan explained through his laughter, the sound of it shocking the younger teen since he so rarely heard it, "You have a little green dog on your ass!"
"...WHAT?!" Georgie tried to turn and see it, but it was to steep of an angle for his neck.
Evan finally stopped laughing and guided the boy to the mirror on the back of his bedroom door so that he could see the little disguised robot holding, of all things, a PINK frosted cupcake.
"Oh god..." The young goth hid his face in his hands, embarassment flooding his face.
"It's cute." Evan's voice broke through his mortification and he looked up at the taller goth.
"Really? You don't think it's too girly or conformist?" The young goth asked as he buttoned up his pants.
Evan shrugged, "It might be to other people, but I think it's cute and it suits you."
"Thanks." Georgie smiled and turned toward the mirror.
"How did you even get that?" The taller asked.
"I uh...I might have convinced Dylan and Stan to let me have a few of their beers..." Georgie explained sheepishly.
The curly haired teen facepalmed, "So it was Dylan, what a surprise...that's exactly why I never drink with him anymore."
"Why?" The younger asked, "What happened?"
Evan unbuttoned his white dress shirt enough to show Georgie the ring that pierced his right nipple, "That's what happened..."
"...Sexy." The young goth smirked and the tall teen shook his head with a smile as he did up his shirt.
It's not my usual style either, fluff isn't something I write often...I hope it's a decent drabble.
Maybe soon I'll write some yaoi instead of shojen-ai~
It's an alright drabble - cute, like I stated above - but there are several mistakes within in it.
But that's okay, because writing just takes practice.
Critique this plz~
The tall goth blinked and raised and eyebrow at the excited goth. / The tall goth blinked and raised an eyebrow at the excited goth.
"Guess where I got it." / "Guess where I got it?"
"Wiat...what?!" / "Wait... what?"
Evan sat down on his bed and gave the young goth a disbelieving look, / Evan sat down on his bed and gave the young goth a disbelieving look.
A few seconds passed as his words processed in the curly goth's mind, then he smiled and pulled Georgie into a hug, / A few seconds passed as his words processed in the curly goth's mind; then he smiled and pulled Georgie into a hug.
The black haired boy was about to protest that he was sexy, not cute, but he felt too comfortable with Evan's scent all around him. / The black haired boy was about to protest that he was sexy, not cute, but with Evan's scent all around him, he was starting to feel a little too comfortable.
"I was just worried that with you being a freshmen and me being a senior that you wouldn't want to date someone who was going to leave you next year." / I was just worried that with you being a freshman and me being a senior, you wouldn't want to date someone who was going to leave you next year."
As Evan backed away he licked his lips which were now smeared with Georgie's dark purple lipstick. / As Evan backed away, he licked at his lips which was now smeared with Georgie's dark purple lipstick.
Georgie tried to turn and see it, but it was to steep of an angle for his neck. / Georgie tried to turn and see it, but it was too steep of an angle for his neck.
And a pair of lips are two items, hence Were not Was. You don't write about multiple people as We Was. It's We Were.
I didn't really spell check before I posted, sorry.
But the change for the comfortable line was nice~
Like I said before, really cute drabble. And you don't need a beta to proofread you stories. Finish writing it. Back away from it for awhile, and then read it out loud to yourself like you would a paper for school. Just some genuine advice from one writer to another.
I try to proof read my writings, but I tend to slack off when it's a short drabble...I get excited simply because I managed to finish something
Yep. I've been watching That 70s Show stuff on youtube, and this senario was just too cute to pass up x3